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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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During the
last
 decade, digitalization has reached all the sectors in the world. Especially, the
education
 sector has been converting to digital medium much faster than the other, due to rapidly improving internet penetration. Today, the involvement of a physical human being in the
classroom
 has been challenged due to the invasion of technology. There are plenty of advantages
of
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 using digital devices for educational purposes.
Firstly
, the lessons are easily accessible even under a pandemic situation like
this
. Anybody, who is having a computer, laptop or mobile phone can join the class despite physical travel restrictions.
Secondly
, multiple study materials
such
 as presentations, videos, images and animations can be used to convey the required message clearly.
This
 is not an easy task in a conventional
classroom
that is
 conducted by a teacher.
However
, apart from the positive
impacts
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 there are some negative impacts too. Mainly those machines do not have any capability to handle the feelings.
This
 is one key ability that should be having when dealing with kids.
On the other hand
, teachers are capable of understanding the feelings of their students and adapting
accordingly
. Knowledge is only one part of
education
.
In addition
 to knowledge, there are some other key skills
such
 as love, caring emotional intelligence, etc. to be gained in a
classroom
.
Also
, it is convenient to organize group activities or physical activities when there is a human interface
instead
 of a machine. In my point of view, we are not yet completely ready to eliminate the role of a teacher from the
classroom
. His presence is necessary to manage the emotional part of the
education
.
However
, computers and technology can be used as supportive tools to enhance the quality of
education
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • Digital learning
  • Personalized guidance
  • Blended learning
  • Remote education
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Human interaction
  • Cultural dimension
  • Mentorship
  • Critical thinking
  • Educational technology
  • Learning outcomes
  • Role model
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