Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
this
age, people say that the loss of some curtain
plants and animals Correct your spelling
certain
species
are the main environmental problem while others believe that there are more important environmental problems. This
essay agrees that the extinction of most living sprcies
is not the most Correct your spelling
species
estential
issue for Correct your spelling
essential
existential
environment
concern.
Human is a social creature who Replace the word
environmental
need
to communicate and socialize for living which is Change the verb form
needs
defferent
from other living Correct your spelling
different
species
.In real life situation
, Fix the agreement mistake
situations
such
as in deep
forest, Add an article
a deep
the deep
the
particular plants and animals need a specific co-operate between each wild Correct article usage
apply
Correct your spelling
lives
life
lifes
due to their Correct your spelling
lives
suvival
. The loss from a few Correct your spelling
survival
species
could effect
Correct your spelling
affect
to
another which affect from Change preposition
apply
distruption
the food chain. Correct your spelling
disruption
For example
, a white tiger that used to widely
seen on Java island, Indonesia now Add a missing verb
be widely
thier
exist only for a study in the zoo.
Back to reality, Correct your spelling
their
human
always Fix the agreement mistake
humans
play
a Change the verb form
plays
hugh
role as an environmental Correct your spelling
huge
protectors
of Correct the article-noun agreement
protector
this
planet earth but their act is totally opposite. Moreover
, we are continue
Change the verb form
continue
creating
Change the verb form
to create
endless
Add an article
an endless
amount
of heat from Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
useing
CFC gas which caused a neverending Correct your spelling
using
Correct your spelling
greenhouse
green house
effect. Correct your spelling
greenhouse
For instance
, carbon
Correct article usage
the carbon
emision
rate Correct your spelling
emission
emissions
is increase
rapidly yearly due to Change the verb form
is increasing
irlegal
industrial's expansion in many parts of the world. Correct your spelling
illegal
legal
In
a result, an international agreement to reduce carbon footprint Change preposition
As
are
useless.
In conclusion, among every environmental Change the verb form
is
Change to a singular noun
problem
problems
human seem to be the Add a comma
,problems
one
who made the problem worst. The loss of particular Correct pronoun usage
ones
species
of plants and animals is one of the most significant issue
. Change to a plural noun
issues
Whist
there are a lot more problems to concern, Correct your spelling
Whilst
such
as globle
warming and carbon emission which is more Correct your spelling
global
urgen
.Correct your spelling
urgent
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