In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have the opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
A lot of years ago, the students selected to
study
their own country. Use synonyms
However
, as there provide more privileges, they are choosing to Linking Words
study
foreign countries. Use synonyms
Although
there are many people who want to Linking Words
study
, to my mind, I would deny Use synonyms
this
possibility.
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Firstly
, the main drawback is financial. Students who want to Linking Words
study
abroad usually suffer from financial demands. Use synonyms
As a result
, they have to work and Linking Words
study
simultaneously. Use synonyms
Then
, their life conditions begin to deteriorate and Linking Words
this
case leads to homesickness among the students. The learners aspire to return their own homesickness. They should not Linking Words
study
abroad if they get too homesick. They cry every night. Everyone goes through homesickness even a little bit. Use synonyms
However
, if novices were visiting home every weekend's at college, and they still miss mom and dad, Linking Words
then
leaving the country for Linking Words
month
at a time might not be a good idea. For Add an article
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fact
that they come across Add the comma(s)
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ignorance
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On the other hand
, there are some excellent reasons to Linking Words
study
other countries.
In factly, as increasing scholars to Use synonyms
study
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another cities
, there are organizing more and more chances for them. Given Replace the adjective
another city
other cities
by
that, undergraduates can achieve more conveniences Change preposition
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such
as after they become graduate and return their hometown they supply with jobs easily as their willing. The best Linking Words
second
cause is studying abroad helps them to learn new languages, appreciate other cultures, overcome Linking Words
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the challenge
challenge
of living in another country and gain a greater understanding of the world.
In conclusion, I believe that if a large number of people desire to foreign University, they should think more about Change the form of the verb
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this
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...