The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Currently, it is an urgent topic about single-sex marriage. While some people consider that it is unacceptable in society, others believe that it is natural and should be encouraged. In my opinion, the gay should have an
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opportunity
to be married. One of the
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why it should be legal is
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it may contribute to an increase
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tolerancy
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tolerance
.
In other words
, if people with any orientation have equal conditions, it will probably lead to the fact that
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will become more understanding.
For example
, in America, gay can be married legally.
This
fact provides more freedom among citizens and makes them more acceptable in society.
In addition
, it can make people happier and more inspired. Not only equality is a good aspect of gay marriage, but
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positive effect on mental health. A good illustration of
this
is my friend who was
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because he was not able to have
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relationship with whom he loved because it was not legally.
However
, he moved to Norway and got
such
a possibility, which in turn made him very happy.
In addition
, it is clear that citizens with other
orientation
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have difficulties in countries where it is not legal.
For instance
, in
such
lands, if a person
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someone who has the same gender, he will probably have to cover his feelings.
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situation, in turn, may be
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cause of stress and depression. In conclusion, single-sex marriage is quite common in some countries. In my opinion, governments should make it possible for gay to be married and be happy.
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