The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Currently, it is an urgent topic about single-sex marriage. While some people consider that it is unacceptable in society, others believe that it is natural and should be encouraged. In my opinion, the gay should have an
opportinity
to be married.
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reason
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tolerancy
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tolerance
In other words
, if people with any orientation have equal conditions, it will probably lead to the fact that public
will become more understanding. Correct article usage
the public
For example
, in America, gay can be married legally. This
fact provides more freedom among citizens and makes them more acceptable in society.
In addition
, it can make people happier and more inspired. Not only equality is a good aspect of gay marriage, but also
a
positive effect on mental health. A good illustration of Add a missing verb
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this
is my friend who was destressed
because he was not able to have Correct your spelling
distressed
official
relationship with whom he loved because it was not legally. Add an article
an official
However
, he moved to Norway and got such
a possibility, which in turn made him very happy. In addition
, it is clear that citizens with other orientation
have difficulties in countries where it is not legal. Fix the agreement mistake
orientations
For instance
, in such
lands, if a person love
someone who has the same gender, he will probably have to cover his feelings. Change the verb form
loves
This
situation, in turn, may be possible
cause of stress and depression.
In conclusion, single-sex marriage is quite common in some countries. In my opinion, governments should make it possible for gay to be married and be happy.Add an article
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