Governments should spend less money on restoring old buildings and more money for new housing and roads development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that governments should provide more funds for establishing new residences and roads

instead

of preserving historical buildings. I personally agree with

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statement because I believe improving infrastructures has imposed positively

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society. In my point of view,

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rehabilitating aged property accentuate its artistic and historical values, it is important to remember that building new infrastructures may improve current living conditions and the efficiency of travel between cities and rural areas.

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opinions extensively.

Firstly

, constructing modern accommodations seems to be a practical approach to provide better demands of current society.

This

means houses can now be tailored to achieve qualities that were not possible with the outdated structures.

For instance

, houses in the Philippines are now built resistant to violent weather,

such

as hurricanes, which happens frequently in the area.

Thus

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many desirable outcomes can be accomplished by utilising advanced technology to redesign housing properties.

Secondly

, developing access

such

as highways and tolls is necessary to create efficient access between cities and suburbs. By building more accessible roads, transportation has become safer and less time-consuming. As an illustration, in 2020, since a new highway between Jakarta and Surabaya was established, the travel time between the two major cities

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decreased from 17 hours to only 7 hours.

Furthermore

, the number of accidents decreased by 70% because truck drivers do not have to worry about encountering landslides during their

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point of view has a promising outcome.

On the other hand

, it is still debatable that restoring heritage structures is

also

important. Many believe

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argument because some places preserve artistic architecture as well as becoming

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the growth of civilisation through time.

However

, in my opinion,

although

true,

this

view should not be a major focus and stop any country to think forward and address current demands for their community to advance in the future. In conclusion, different views on the allocation of

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budget will continue to exist. Maintaining antique sites is necessary to preserve art and its story, but not as important as developing current infrastructures for practicality and efficiency.

Hence

, my belief leaned towards agreeing that more resources need to be set aside for the latter option.