You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear sir,
I am writing
this
to request a new room
for accommodation
due to
various problems which are faced due to
my roommate.
I have been allotted a accommodation
on sharing basis with another student. I am going through some circumstances which require your attention. My roommate is a notorious individual, and it is preferred by him to play loud music while
studying. Moreover
, most of the time various friends of his occupied my side of the room
which caused me ample difficulties.
Loud music being played while
I am concentrating on my studies is something that disturbs my peace of mind along with
wasting my precious time for studies. In addition
, my privacy is breached because most of the time my room
is filled with strangers whom i
do not know personally. My Change the capitalization
I
accommodation
is bothering me and needs to be changed.
It would be appreciated if you could provide me with accommodation
which is not shared with another pupil. If extra charges are required to pay for a single-person room
I am willing to pay.
Thanks for your consideration in this
matter.
Best regards,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea to maintain coherence.
task achievement
Check for grammar mistakes like the misuse of articles and ensure a consistent writing tone throughout.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure and is easy to follow.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is formal, which is appropriate for this type of correspondence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite