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Increasing number of schools providing laptops and tablets replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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In the current environment,
students
 are provided with
laptops
 and tablets, and they are moving away from
books
 and other printed materials like exams and assignments. Let's discuss the pros and cons of both learning trends. One of the main benefits of learning with
laptops
 and tablets is that
students
 can make use of
internet
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 which has
plethora
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 of information.
Students
 can do their research and create their own websites where they can efficiently organize their work.
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 advantage is that
students
 can showcase their creativity using the social media tools like YouTube channel, Facebook live etc. where they can get instant feedback and appreciation for their work.
On the other hand
, there are certain drawbacks of learning with
laptops
 and tablets and moving away from
books
 and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
Students
 are getting hooked to gadgets, social media and there are some harmful effects to their body e.g., spectacles at
early
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 age, compulsive disorder etc. Another drawback is that
students
 are not making use of resourceful libraries where they can educate themselves with readily available knowledge. In conclusion,
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 of gadgets and
laptops
 for learning carries benefits compared to
books
 and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
However
, there is
need
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of
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balanced
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a balanced
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 approach on the way of learning to be provided to the
students
.
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Toddlers
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 to teenager age group should be leveraged with
books
 and printed learning so that they are saved from harmful effects and can get practical learning.
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students
 need to
provided
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be provided
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 with gadgets and
laptops
 to enhance their learning by understanding the latest trends.
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