The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with the sentence?

Nowadays, many public hold the view that the ministry should be spent

money

to improve public facilities rather than using the fund for traditional and entertainment activities. I partly agree with

this

notion, but both aspects are essential for citizens in various ways. There are many reasons to invest

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in art and craft and theatres activities. The primary point is that people can enhance their skills in

this

field

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if they would pursue careers in these events.

This

is because they can earn

money

the easiest way and

also

people get a platform to reduce their stress.

Therefore

,

this

offers them feel relax from their work and study.

For example

, people always consider spending time with family on weekdays

such

as watching movies in the theatre.

Furthermore

,

this

policy offers the authority to earn more

money

, because ,usually community prefer an activity that they feel is entertainment.

Hence

,

this

would have been beneficial for the government.

On the other hand

, there are several views that investing

money

in public service. The main reason for

this

trend is that if the authority

improve

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the public facilities ,

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the resident

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would use them much more. As these are cheaper and

also

convenient while using it facilitates by citizens.

As a result

, the government will get resources to earn

money

.

For instance

, many developed nations always allocate funds to improve the infrastructure of public facilities. Another most important factor is that the public will less trouble from environmental issues

such

as waterlogging and transportation. The reason behind

this

point is that the government use the

money

to resolve all problems which are facing by the common man's. In conclusion, I strongly believe that spending on entertainment activities and improving public service are too crucial for the public

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because

this

offer not only provide an opportunity to feel relax but

also

give cheaper transportation to

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.