The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with the sentence?

Nowadays, many public hold the view that the ministry should be spent

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to improve public facilities rather than using the fund for traditional and entertainment activities. I partly agree with

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notion, but both aspects are essential for citizens in various ways. There are many reasons to invest

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in art and craft and theatres activities. The primary point is that people can enhance their skills in

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field

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if they would pursue careers in these events.

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is because they can earn

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the easiest way and

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people get a platform to reduce their stress.

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,

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offers them feel relax from their work and study.

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, people always consider spending time with family on weekdays

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as watching movies in the theatre.

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,

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policy offers the authority to earn more

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, because ,usually community prefer an activity that they feel is entertainment.

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would have been beneficial for the government.

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, there are several views that investing

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in public service. The main reason for

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trend is that if the authority

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the public facilities ,

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the resident

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would use them much more. As these are cheaper and

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convenient while using it facilitates by citizens.

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, the government will get resources to earn

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.

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, many developed nations always allocate funds to improve the infrastructure of public facilities. Another most important factor is that the public will less trouble from environmental issues

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as waterlogging and transportation. The reason behind

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point is that the government use the

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to resolve all problems which are facing by the common man's. In conclusion, I strongly believe that spending on entertainment activities and improving public service are too crucial for the public

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because

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offer not only provide an opportunity to feel relax but

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give cheaper transportation to

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