Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
It is often said that arts like
music
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are spendthrifts of money financed by the Use synonyms
government
rather the money must be utilized for the development of public services. I am completely against Use synonyms
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statement. I firmly believe that Linking Words
this
view is incorrect, and will discuss the reasons why in Linking Words
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essay.
Art is one of the prime factors which bear the cultural identity of a Linking Words
nation
. Without the improvement of art, a civilization cannot exist. Use synonyms
For example
, the developed Linking Words
nation
like the USA, UK, India, all Use synonyms
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developed in Change the verb form
are
music
and Use synonyms
theatre
. They are supported by their Use synonyms
government
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industry is not backed by the Linking Words
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, it would not flourish. Supporting Use synonyms
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sector by financing is not a waste of money rather it is contributing to the Linking Words
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.
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However
, Public services like education, transport, health, and many other sectors must be key priorities of a Linking Words
government
. But it cannot be only the focus point of a Use synonyms
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. Use synonyms
Government
should have equal agenda to develop all the sectors. To compete with the developed countries, a Use synonyms
nation
must give uniform importance to all the sectors. Use synonyms
Otherwise
, it will be quite impossible to adjust to the globe. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
theatre
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music
are the major factors that can make a state known to the outside world. There are some international awards that bring glory to the country. Thence, Use synonyms
government
finance is needed to improve Use synonyms
music
and Use synonyms
theatre
.
To conclude, I feel strongly that to prosper as a Use synonyms
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government
financing is a mandatory subject. Use synonyms
However
, there may be some argument about how much funds can be allotted to Linking Words
this
sector, but Linking Words
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is undoubtedly out of the question that art and Linking Words
theatre
need support from the Use synonyms
government
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite