Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What are the reasons for it? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

There is an opinion that countries are being negatively affected by international
tourism
.
This
can be due to the several problems that
tourism
may cause,
such
as the rise in cost for places of entertainment and
higher
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level of pollution. A possible solution to
this
issue could be the discount for residents and
application
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of restrictions.
To begin
with, citizens are concerned about
tourism
due to the fact that it brings a lot of
discomfort
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that it causes, which is higher costs for entertainment. Obviously, tourists are attracted to the cities where they can spend their time enjoyably, so they will most likely visit regional shopping
centers
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, cinemas and cafes. If the place is popular among the tourists, the services there will be much higher than usual.
Consequently
, it will be unaffordable for the public to visit them. In order to fix
this
issue, government and local businesses should make some price regulations. Public catering establishments and shops could apply cost reduction conditions for the natives
,
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so that people would be able to visit popular and high-quality places
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the town.
For example
, there is a fixed discount system for citizens at most of the Mexican bars, whenever there is a major event coming.
This
way, locals can enjoy football or any other matches in bars without overpaying. In conclusion,
tourism
has
negative
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impact on the country and might cause hardships for people living there, but it can be
also
fixed by adjusting fair prices or price reduction systems. From my point of view,
this
issue is extremely important for nations
although
it still can be easily solved.
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