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Many people are copying celebrities from magazine and on TV Why is this happening? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy celebrities?

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Most teenagers feel a desire to be like their favourite
celebrity
 and most of them start copying
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behavior
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 of popular actors, actresses, singers or even influencers. They feel jealousy towards
a
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 luxurious
life
 those celebrities put on display, which causes them to have unrealistic expectations and standards for themselves. Popular
people
 tend to make public only the best parts of their
life
. Building a fake image of happy and luxurious
life
. Young
people
 seeing all of it tend to feel jealousy towards what they know of a celebrities
life
. Those fans want to become their favourite star, be
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 their place or look like them. That could lead them to start
copycating
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copycatting
copying
 everything that person does. Some of them could even have
an
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expensive plastic surgery, for one purpose only – look
as
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like
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 their
favorite
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favourite
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celebrity
. In some cases,
people
 start to lead a
life
 they cannot afford: buying expensive cars, going to luxurious
restraunts
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restaurants
, owning a designer piece of clothing etc.
Such
behavior
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 could lead to many mental health issues.
People
 set unrealistic expectations and standards for themselves and suffer from anxiety or constant stress caused by it. They feel pressure to be like their beloved
celebrity
. They constantly compare the most absurd characteristics and parts of
famous
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a famous
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 person’s
life
 to
their
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, starting from apartment to hair or nail style. In
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the long-term
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long-term
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long term
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 it causes depression, anxiety and burnout. I don’t think copying a
celebrity
 is a good idea
,
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 because it only causes more mental health issues due to the constant pressure we put on ourselves while comparing our lives with
their
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theirs
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. We should try to prioritize our overall well-being.
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