Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?

Teen years are the most significant and complicated in every human’s
life
.
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causes may be very different
such
as
problems
with school,
parents
and friends.
Therefore
parents
and teachers should help them to deal with their issues. It’s clearly known that teens are needed to make the most important
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in their
life
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because people finish their middle school
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that
ages
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and go to
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universities, jobs. I will give an example
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my
life
. I’m studying in 12 grade at
this
moment and I have 10 subjects every day. The amount of stress equals the amount of information I need to learn.
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there are a lot of cases of misunderstandings between teens and their
parents
today. Most
of
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the
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parents
put pressure on their kids.
For
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force them to work or choose
unloved
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profession. These are not all the
problems
teenagers face. It is a global problem that must be solved because
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of
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is
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teenager’s hands. People need to do their best especially
parents
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because they are responsible to
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of their kids. There are several
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to make
life
better.
Firstly
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should
to
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talk about everything with each other and work out all the
problems
together.
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parents
should take
a psychology courses
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psychology courses
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to settle relations with their
teen
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teens
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.
Thus
parents
will learn how to support and respect kid’s
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. If there is
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good
relations
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in
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it will be easy to cope with school
problems
. Summing up we can say that all
problems
can be solved and
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one is
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not
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exception
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. The main thing is understanding and
parents
should keep in mind it.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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