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Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?

#teenagers #face #school #home #parents
Teen years are the most significant and complicated in every human’s
life
.
It’s
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 causes may be very different
such
 as
problems
 with school,
parents
 and friends.
Therefore
parents
 and teachers should help them to deal with their issues. It’s clearly known that teens are needed to make the most important
chose
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choice
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 in their
life
,
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 because people finish their middle school
in
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at
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 that
ages
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age
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 and go to
the
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universities, jobs. I will give an example
form
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from
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 my
life
. I’m studying in 12 grade at
this
 moment and I have 10 subjects every day. The amount of stress equals the amount of information I need to learn.
Moreover
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 there are a lot of cases of misunderstandings between teens and their
parents
 today. Most
of
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the
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parents
 put pressure on their kids.
For
instance
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 force them to work or choose
unloved
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an unloved
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 profession. These are not all the
problems
 teenagers face. It is a global problem that must be solved because
future
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 of
earth
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 is
on
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 teenager’s hands. People need to do their best especially
parents
,
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 because they are responsible to
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the life
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life
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 of their kids. There are several
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devices
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advices
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 to make
life
 better.
Firstly
family
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the family
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 should
to
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talk about everything with each other and work out all the
problems
 together.
Furthermore
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parents
 should take
a psychology courses
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psychology courses
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 to settle relations with their
teen
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teens
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.
Thus
parents
 will learn how to support and respect kid’s
choice
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choices
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. If there is
a
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good
relations
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 in
family
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the family
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 it will be easy to cope with school
problems
. Summing up we can say that all
problems
 can be solved and
this
 one is
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not
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exception
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an exception
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. The main thing is understanding and
parents
 should keep in mind it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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