Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves some people think it is tgood while other think they are disadvantage to this discuss both side and give your opinion

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and few individuals believe that some companies sponsoring
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both side of
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many support the view that nowadays
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companies sponsor sport in order to advertise themselves it has its advantage as well as it disadvantage sport is sportsman are given of best good of the
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high prestige which affect positively for the
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good to sportsman than with social media sport which it
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the other hand the other people argue about harmful of the sponsoring
sports
the demerits of advertising through
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or the player which can cause bad effect on the
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could be affected by the performance of the sportsman
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I believe that the idea of advertising through sponsoring
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beneficial for
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both multinational
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