Some people argue that in the modern world it is necessary to be able to speak at least two foreign languages. Others say that it is better to know one foreign language very well than to have poor command of two foreign languages. What is your opinion?

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In
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modern
era , it is widely believed that people's
language
adaptability of various languages and communicating skills are indispensable.In
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will explain why
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feel being bilingual can bring many positive outcomes. A primary reason is job
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. In
this
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people have extensive social interaction with their company
colleages
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colleagues
and international workmates as well. In
such
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social interaction skills are needed for
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understanding of work.
Such
scenarios often
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involves
involve
more than one
language
conversation from numerous clients. Being bilingual can tackle
this
issue and can bring exceptional
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results
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for the
firm
.
Secondly
, speaking multiple languages can ease a person to learn a new culture.
For instance
, I am
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American but
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had a decent understanding of
hindi
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. When
i
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visited India
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explored their culture and values. Because
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knew
hindi
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was able to make a conversation with locals and brought more knowledge from them.
Thus
, job segment and cultural hurdles can be averted if a person knows more than one
language
. People who speak and adapted
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than two languages can help any
firm
to expand internationally and much viable business can
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by a
firm
.
For example
, when Coca Cola was entering India they had
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understanding of Indian culture and regions
in particular
. Native
indians
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were working
in
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the firm
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firm
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firms
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who
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facilitated
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perception of India and succeed in establishing
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market shares. To conclude , business sector and
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cultural
understanding are the two major benefits of more
language
adapters,
however
, a company can change their way of success by
this
.
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