Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

It is today a norm that

celebrities

nearly cover all means of media fully. Some

people

oppose

this

prevalence of famous

people

for fear of detrimental impacts on the young generation. I,

however

, totally support

this

tendency for the benefits of children’s development and future preparation.

First

and foremost,

celebrities

play an essential role in children’s physical and mental growth. For the former, it is obvious that the prevalence of idols has inspired an increasingly tremendous number of youngsters to deter their sedentary lifestyle, which is a contemporary matter of concern. To exemplify, the Kpop dance cover trend has encouraged millions of teenagers to follow and dance as a type of exercise, rather than spending all their time in front of

TV

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or laptop for entertainment. For the latter, the influencers can

also

nurture children’s sense of love and sharing, by motivating them to take part in society-building activities. In Vietnam,

such

celebrities

as Ha Anh Tuan, Thuy Tien or Hoai Linh have made a considerable influence on youngsters’ doing charity or other voluntary works to support the community's development.

Second

but of no less importance, famous

people

can be exemplary in students’ preparation for the future.

However

lucky they are,

celebrities

are always required to make extraordinary efforts to succeed in the competitive market of showbiz. Blackpink, the most popular Kpop group nowadays, with more than twelve hours of daily practice is an evident example. Thanks to them, the message of incessant striving for

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is conveyed.

Besides

, whatever industry the renowned

people

are working in, it is compulsory for them to master multiskills, ranging from communication, personal branding to marketing or even languages.

This

makes them a role model for children to be proactive in their self-learning to perfect themselves in disparate areas. In conclusion, I am

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of the opinion that the full coverage of superstars in the media positively influences the children, both in their development and their groundwork for the future. By activating parental and school controls to prevent the excessive idolization of children, I believe those aforementioned benefits will be utilized.