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‘The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools.’ How far do you agree with this prediction?

#‘the #internet #course #books #schools #prediction
One fact which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that with the advancement of technology the
internet
 is becoming essential
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 every aspect.
Scholars
 are finding digital learning convenient and a vital source of
information
.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons for it and share the importance of traditional
books
 over the
internet
.
However
, I completely agree with the above statement that traditional
books
 will never be replaced by the
internet
. On the one hand, course
books
 whether conventional or digital are designed by experts which
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 incorporated with the subject syllabus and leading to testing procedures
such
 as, internal assessments, formal examination, etcetera.
Moreover
, they are proven to enhance
scholars
 academic performance and increase their potential for the progression to higher studies. To exemplify, a hard copy of the classic book ' The four P's of
Marketing'
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 is still recommended for business studies students despite abundant
information
 available on the
internet
.
Therefore
,traditional
books
 will always remain a necessary part of
scholars
 curriculum.
On the other hand
, the
internet
 can play a useful part to excel
scholars
 knowledge as it provides access to
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vast range of
information
.
Furthermore
, it makes lessons less teacher lead and more autonomous learning.
This
 will teach children more self-learning compared to the old rote-learning procedures.
For instance
, distance learning is one of its examples.
By contrast
, it should be used under the supervision of
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 as children do not have
skills
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 to discriminate between source and sift
information
 to marshal their facts. To conclude,
Although
 the
internet
 is
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 vital source of
information
,
but
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children should use it as a guided-learning process
not
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 as an exercise of data gathering.
Nevertheless
, the material and quality of the course
books
 always remain
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an integral part of their syllabus. The
internet
 can be judged a useful supplement to
this
,
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 if used carefully and under supervision.
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