Relocating companies, factories and employees to country side provide benefits to reduce traffic jams and housing problems. To what extend do you agree?

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many people believe that moving out the

factories

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and

companies

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to suburban

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cannot permanently solve the problems of

traffic

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jams and

air

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pollution

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, I hold the opposite notion that changing their locations can play a remarkable role in reducing the

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of

pollution

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and

traffic

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. On the one hand, many individuals believe that moving

companies

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and

factories

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to suburbs is a provisional solution as

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action cannot stop those

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' performance.

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, they may be active far from the urban

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but it does not mean that they do not pollute the

air

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and the environment.

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, if

companies

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were moved to the regions outside of the cities, they would make the clean

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, water, and nature of that area polluted.

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a survey, some states in the United States of America have begun to start

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project

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a couple of years ago. Interestingly,

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it failed as a

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higher

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of

air

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, water, and nature

pollution

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were

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reported gradually despite some housing and

traffic

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jam problems

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solved.

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, there is another group of people who assert that moving some highly activated

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and

companies

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out to the countryside can result in fewer

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travels which entirely causes

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amount

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of

traffic

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congestion. Needless to say, cities themselves have a significant

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of

air

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pollution

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due to

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the increasing number of automobiles, and motorcycles,

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the excessive

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of carbon dioxide emission, resulting from

factories

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' production process, can deteriorate the condition.

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, if some more active

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would be

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moved to the

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of the cities,

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amount

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of

pollution

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would be released. In China,

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, the government has decided to move big

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to suburban

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and it has considered some specific

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for

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aim.

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, the government located those

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' employees near their workplace in order to decrease the number of commutations,

traffic

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jams, and

air

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pollution

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as a result

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. In conclusion, after considering both viewpoints, I agree that moving out big

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and producing plants to

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the countryside

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can be helpful and influential in reducing the

amount

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of

traffic

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congestion and

air

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pollution

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resulting from their existence inside the residential

areas

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.