Relocating companies, factories and employees to country side provide benefits to reduce traffic jams and housing problems. To what extend do you agree?

While

many people believe that moving out the

factories

and

companies

to suburban

areas

cannot permanently solve the problems of

traffic

jams and

air

pollution

, I hold the opposite notion that changing their locations can play a remarkable role in reducing the

amount

of

pollution

and

traffic

. On the one hand, many individuals believe that moving

companies

and

factories

to suburbs is a provisional solution as

this

action cannot stop those

companies

' performance.

Therefore

, they may be active far from the urban

areas

but it does not mean that they do not pollute the

air

and the environment.

Likewise

, if

companies

were moved to the regions outside of the cities, they would make the clean

air

, water, and nature of that area polluted.

According to

a survey, some states in the United States of America have begun to start

this

project

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a couple of years ago. Interestingly,

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it failed as a

remarkable

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higher

amount

of

air

, water, and nature

pollution

were

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reported gradually despite some housing and

traffic

jam problems

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solved.

However

, there is another group of people who assert that moving some highly activated

factories

and

companies

out to the countryside can result in fewer

number of

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travels which entirely causes

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amount

of

traffic

congestion. Needless to say, cities themselves have a significant

amount

of

air

pollution

due to

the increasing number of automobiles, and motorcycles,

therefore

the excessive

amount

of carbon dioxide emission, resulting from

factories

' production process, can deteriorate the condition.

Accordingly

, if some more active

factories

would be

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moved to the

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of the cities,

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amount

of

pollution

would be released. In China,

for instance

, the government has decided to move big

companies

to suburban

areas

and it has considered some specific

areas

for

this

aim.

Additionally

, the government located those

factories

' employees near their workplace in order to decrease the number of commutations,

traffic

jams, and

air

pollution

as a result

. In conclusion, after considering both viewpoints, I agree that moving out big

factories

and producing plants to

countryside

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can be helpful and influential in reducing the

amount

of

traffic

congestion and

air

pollution

resulting from their existence inside the residential

areas

.