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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in art?

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Art
 has been always been an
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indispensable
 part
in
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 every
cultures
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culture
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 from all over the world.
However
, in the age of industrialization and modernization,
art
 is not considered to be
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the top priority like it used to be anymore. Nowadays, the number of
people
opt
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 for
art
 is diminishing dramatically, and the majority is going for science, technology and especially business.
This
 essay is aimed at discussing
about
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reasons behind
this
 trend, and solutions in detail to
this
.
Art
 plays an important role in every
societies
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 and
cultures
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culture
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,
through
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 the history of
the
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human being. Since
human
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 walked on their feet, knew to use tools in their daily lives,
art
 started to be formed. We can see pictures carved on the walls in stone caves, it was the oldest evidence about the appearance of
art
.
Nevertheless
,
people
 are now losing their interest
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 it in the modern world. One of the biggest reasons is the lack of financial freedom. Even in the past, becoming an
artists
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artist
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 was never considered to be a good job with
stable
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 salary. Gifted artists like Van Gogh, Da Vinci ended up their lives in poorness. Today,
this
 situation tends to remain unchanged. Those who pursuing
art
 have to struggle to earn a living
however
 talented they are.
On the other hand
, the others who choose to apply themselves to science, technology and business seem to have
a much better lives
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, with competitive salaries as well.
However
, it is causing a huge loss of cultural heritages and steps can be taken to prevent
this
.
Firstly
, Governments can help in reviving the dying
art
 by creating a budget solely for the
Art
.
This
 money can
then
 be utilized to open
art
 schools, which offer jobs to
art
 graduates. To add on, some frequent competitions and exhibitions can attract more
people
 and tourists which can generate more income. When
people
 see a good amount of money they can freely choose to become an artist. To conclude, Loss of
Art
 can be
loss
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 of some cultural heritage. Most
people
 are choosing to go for Science, Businesses and Technology
instead
 of
Art
, due to financial constraints. But enough
efforts
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 from, everyone can turn
people
 towards the arts.
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