Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Recently, as the media have advanced significantly celebrities have become the centre of attention and
as a result
, many individuals have fantasized about being among them.
Although
membership of
this
elite group has its own perks
such
as
fame
and high salary, it
also
brings certain disadvantages like overwhelming social interactions.
Therefore
one
must be careful when it comes to choosing a career. To commence with, let's discuss
fame
which is rather self-explanatory. Being famous would mean that everyone knows you and tend to behave either favourably or unfavourable towards you. Since
fame
is a
double edged
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blade, it could cause you to receive many love messages and even discounts from local vendors and people would literally adore you.
However
, it could
also
lead to the inability to experience a private life with all the paparazzi and reporters.
Therefore
one
would feel mostly overwhelmed most of the time.
On the other hand
,
one
subject of most debates is their salaries. It is no myth that famous actors/actresses and athletes would receive many times more than the average working-class
employees
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.
For example
, as I have searched for many jobs in my expertise on LinkedIn, I've realized that the average Software Engineer would receive 120,000$ per year while
for instance
, Johnny Depp is offered 20,000,000$ per movie.
This
huge gap is
one
of the reasons many people wish to be among celebrities
however
,
one
must always
considers
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the fact that not only most that enters
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or sports industry wouldn't become famous, but
also
in the process of becoming
one
, it is highly probable that they would feel stressed due to the pressure that comes with the work. Not to mention, wealth should never be the sole reason to pursue
this
career since there are lots of wealthy people in almost every field. In conclusion, becoming a famous actor/actress or a successful athlete certainly could be a well rewarding career by providing you with
fame
and a large salary
however
it has its own demerits
such
as stress and even depression. In my opinion, the benefits outweigh the disadvantages and if I could,
one
day I would become a celebrity myself.
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