Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Recently, as the media have advanced significantly celebrities have become the centre of attention and
as a result
, many individuals have fantasized about being among them. Although
membership of this
elite group has its own perks such
as fame
and high salary, it also
brings certain disadvantages like overwhelming social interactions. Therefore
one
must be careful when it comes to choosing a career.
To commence with, let's discuss fame
which is rather self-explanatory. Being famous would mean that everyone knows you and tend to behave either favourably or unfavourable towards you. Since fame
is a double edged
blade, it could cause you to receive many love messages and even discounts from local vendors and people would literally adore you. Add a hyphen
double-edged
However
, it could also
lead to the inability to experience a private life with all the paparazzi and reporters. Therefore
one
would feel mostly overwhelmed most of the time.
On the other hand
, one
subject of most debates is their salaries. It is no myth that famous actors/actresses and athletes would receive many times more than the average working-class employees
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employee
For example
, as I have searched for many jobs in my expertise on LinkedIn, I've realized that the average Software Engineer would receive 120,000$ per year while for instance
, Johnny Depp is offered 20,000,000$ per movie. This
huge gap is one
of the reasons many people wish to be among celebrities however
, one
must always considers
the fact that not only most that enters Change the verb form
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or sports industry wouldn't become famous, but Correct article usage
the movie
also
in the process of becoming one
, it is highly probable that they would feel stressed due to the pressure that comes with the work. Not to mention, wealth should never be the sole reason to pursue this
career since there are lots of wealthy people in almost every field.
In conclusion, becoming a famous actor/actress or a successful athlete certainly could be a well rewarding career by providing you with fame
and a large salary however
it has its own demerits such
as stress and even depression. In my opinion, the benefits outweigh the disadvantages and if I could, one
day I would become a celebrity myself.Submitted by armin.oveisi on
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