Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, populations interest has been increased towards media. In a section of the society that has a curiosity about national level

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others want to read reports about other countries. I personally believe that national and international

news

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have the same importance because both are interlinked. In the course of the essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument.

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with, those

people

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who read and watch

news

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about the

country

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, politics, crime and social issues argue that they are living in a

country

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and their feature generations

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live in

this

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country

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that's why they are much interested in local

news

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. If they do not have knowledge about their

country

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then

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they will face some problems.

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, citizen travel to another side of the

country

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without any information, when he reaches there and suffer from the adverse situation if he has proper

news

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about that area and plan according to that situation.

On the other hand

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people

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are curious about the world and thought that the whole world is connected with each other because most of the commodities depend on the other countries if we are aware of those countries politics

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we predict our

country

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situation.

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, most of the fossil fuel import from the UAE if their life is normal

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our

country

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's oil supply will be stable.

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, some

people

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businesses are on an international level due to

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they gather international

news

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. In conclusion, some

people

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deal with national, and they read only local

news

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however

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others deal internationally, and they have an interest in those regions.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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