Airline Companies in many countries have reduced the cost of tickets. Discuss whether this is positive or negative developments. Give some examples based on your own experience.

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, the world
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a global village. A large deduction in
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been seen the recent years.
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the pros and cons of change in airfares. To embark with advantages,
air
travel
is now affordable and economical in comparison to
last
decade.
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to
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area of society can afford to
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overseas to meet their kith and kins. To illustrate , earlier, the relatives who lived abroad visited their friends and family in
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country
after several years due to high airfares .
However
, now they visit frequently in
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span of time.
Moreover
,
decline
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the decline
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in
air
tickets proved
as
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a
boom
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for tourism. Tourism is flourishing
day
by
day
. It is not only given
opportunity
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the opportunity
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to travellers to explore
the
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foreign places but
also
adds up to the revenue of the tourist
country
.
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get cheaper tour packages with cheaper flights.
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, as commuting
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easier and masses can
travel
from one
country
to
other
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another country
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country
within their budget. It leads to
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of fatal
disease
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Health
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of
people
is at stake. Different kind of viruses which have
tendency
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to multiply and are challenging to combat. To epitome , the coronavirus is a good illustration of it, it spreads all across the globe due to
air
travel
.
Consequently
, it leads to
pandemic
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the pandemic

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which puts the
day
to
day
life of
people
on
halt
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. On top of that, more
people
travelling means more flights are reserved and frequent
air
trips are arranged, which are directly lead to higher consumption of natural resources like fuel and
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in pollution. All surge in carbon dioxide in
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has been noted in recent years. To recapitulate, as every coin has two Side, reduced airfares
also
has pros and cons. All we need is a balanced, logical and rational approach.
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