People nowadays are used to disposable items meaning that they use things for short time and throw them away. What do you think is the cause of this and what problems can it lead to?

In
this
fast moving
Add a hyphen
fast-moving

It appears that fast moving is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).

show examples
contemorary
Correct your spelling
contemporary

The word contemorary is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

era, people prefer to
use
non-recyclable items as these are
convinient
Correct your spelling
convenient

The word convinient is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

to
use
and
time saving
Add a hyphen
time-saving

It appears that time saving is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).

show examples
.
This
essay will highlight the principal causes of
this
issue and
also
enumerates its negative effects.
To begin
with, there are several reasons why folks are using
such
stuff, the
first
and foremost is that it is effortless to
use
them. People do not need to clean or maintain disposable things. They just utilize the item and throw, very
convinient
Correct your spelling
convenient

The word convinient is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

to
use
.
Secondly
, the usage is not only uncomplicated but
also
time saving
Add a hyphen
time-saving

It appears that time saving is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).

show examples
. Individuals are busy in their
profession
Replace the word
professional

The word profession doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
lives and have less
time
to do household chores.
For example
, it is easy for
woking
Correct your spelling
working

The word woking doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
employees to buy packet food, just eat and
thow
Correct your spelling
throw
how

The word thow is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

the packing material.
Finally
,
last
but not the least, it
become
Add a missing verb
has become

It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.

show examples
habit
Add an article
a habit

The noun phrase habit seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
to
use
these items and folks are so comfortable with them, it is hard to change the habit.
For instance
, A WHO report
,
Remove the comma
apply

The comma may be separating the subject and verb in your sentence. Consider removing it.

show examples
revealed that solid waste is increasing at a rapid pace and out of which 50 % are recyclable things that could have been utilized but
ends
Change the verb form
end

The singular verb ends does not appear to agree with the plural subject recyclable things. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

show examples
up to landfill sites because of individuals
negligance
Correct your spelling
negligence

The word negligance is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

. But, now the
time
has come to mend our ways,
otherwise
Add a comma
,otherwise

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase otherwise. Consider adding a comma.

show examples
we will regret
later
Correct pronoun usage
it later

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

show examples
. With respect to the consequences, the major effect is that it has detrimental effects on our environment. The non-recyclable items are polluting our surroundings and
also
Add a missing verb
are also

It seems that you are missing a verb. Consider adding it.

show examples
unaesthetic to watch. To epitome, an article published in "The Hindu" newspaper reported that soil pollution has been rising at
faster
Add an article
a faster

The noun phrase faster pace seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
pace since
last
Correct article usage
the last

It seems that article use may be incorrect here.

show examples
decade.
Beside
Replace the word
Besides

The word Beside may be used incorrectly. Review the following notes to determine the appropriate usage for your context.

show examples
this
, piles of
these
Change the determiner
this thown stuff

It appears that the plural demonstrative these is modifying the singular noun stuff. Consider using a singular demonstrative or a plural noun instead.

show examples
thown
Correct your spelling
thrown

The word thown is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

stuff spread various communicable diseases
such
as malaria and dengue.
Therefore
, certain steps need to be taken as it is not good for our health. To conclude,
although
usage of
non- reusable
Correct your spelling
non-reusable

The word non- reusable seems to be miswritten. Consider replacing it.

show examples
products are in
tread
Add an article
the tread

The noun phrase tread seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
but
Remove the conjunction
apply

It appears that the word but is unnecessary in this sentence. Consider removing it.

show examples
humans need to understand its side-effects too,
otherwise
it will be very late to resolve the situation.
Submitted by ishasharawat2 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Need a higher score on IELTS Writing?
After you write your essay, you will be provided with tips with examples of how to make your essay better in order to get a score above 7.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays:
The best new way to check your essay
Writing9 scans your text for all types of mistakes, from typos to sentence structure problems and beyond.