People nowadays are used to disposable items meaning that they use things for short time and throw them away. What do you think is the cause of this and what problems can it lead to?

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fast moving

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era, people prefer to

use

non-recyclable items as these are

convinient

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use

and

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This

essay will highlight the principal causes of

this

issue and

also

enumerates its negative effects.

To begin

with, there are several reasons why folks are using

such

stuff, the

first

and foremost is that it is effortless to

use

them. People do not need to clean or maintain disposable things. They just utilize the item and throw, very

convinient

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use

Secondly

, the usage is not only uncomplicated but

also

time saving

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. Individuals are busy in their

profession

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lives and have less

time

to do household chores.

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, it is easy for

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employees to buy packet food, just eat and

thow

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how

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the packing material.

Finally

last

but not the least, it

become

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habit

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use

these items and folks are so comfortable with them, it is hard to change the habit.

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, A WHO report

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revealed that solid waste is increasing at a rapid pace and out of which 50 % are recyclable things that could have been utilized but

ends

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up to landfill sites because of individuals

negligance

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. But, now the

time

has come to mend our ways,

otherwise

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we will regret

later

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. With respect to the consequences, the major effect is that it has detrimental effects on our environment. The non-recyclable items are polluting our surroundings and

also

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unaesthetic to watch. To epitome, an article published in "The Hindu" newspaper reported that soil pollution has been rising at

faster

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a faster

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pace since

last

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decade.

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this

, piles of

these

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thown

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stuff spread various communicable diseases

such

as malaria and dengue.

Therefore

, certain steps need to be taken as it is not good for our health. To conclude,

although

usage of

non- reusable

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products are in

tread

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but

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humans need to understand its side-effects too,

otherwise

it will be very late to resolve the situation.

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