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Dieting can play major role for keep healthy life .Do you agree or disagree.

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In the modern ,world a lot of people choose healthy diets for keeping their bodies in good form. And it is clear that today our population became more sportive and fit.
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, does dieting have a major role in
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? Some experts say yes, diets help our organisms to keep a good form, but other researchers disagree. In
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 essay, I would like to prove the
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 opinion and describe my disagreement. The
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 reason why I disagree is no evidence. Many doctors advise their patients of comprehensive recovery. It is include dieting, vitamins and physical activity.
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 complex may body of the patient healthier, indeed. But dieting alone does not. The
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 reason why I disagree is uncontrollable. A
diet
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 should be balanced and prescribed by a diabetologist. There are a lot of cases when women sit on a
diet
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 that consists of only raw vegetables and it is caused by stomach ulcers, chronic stomach upset and depression. It happens because a balanced
diet
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 should consist of different types of chemical elements. We should get amino acids, lipids, proteins and carbohydrates. Without ,them a person can even die. In conclusion, I can say that
diet
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 is a very important thing in a healthy life, but it does not play a key role in keeping the normal functioning of human organisms. Care about health should be comprehensive and correct.
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