Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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while suffering from bad consequences in

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in the same field for

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it is better for him to stay calm and nurture wait for better time so that the remaining money and property could be saved.

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believe that it is best to tackle the result created from financial distress or

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with positive thought and eventually practice new methods. In

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to find out new

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technology and cure for

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to overcome the bad situation and unsatisfactions. In conclusion,

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or in business can put an individual in

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keep patience and wait for betterment. In my opinion, no matter what

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should not stop themselves finding out

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, business and financial condition rather than to stay quiet.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

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More and more people are forgetting the actual meaning of occasions (e.g. national festivals). What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions do you suggest?

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. DO the advanatges of this outweigh the disadvantages?