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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what conseguences can it lead?

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At currently, some
people
's demand is to migrate from their birthplace to explore the
marvelous
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 world. There are numerous motivations
such
 as erudite educations, high remuneration careers, and magnificent
life
.
In contrast
, immigration leads their country
a
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long term issue, underdevelopment. In several countries, popularity in evacuation increases over 125 percentage,comparing to the
last
 decade, due to the fact that Generation Y and Z believe that they would offer more opportunities in
term
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 of education. Famous colleges
such
 as Ivy
league
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 schools
also
 accept foreign students and bestow scholarships.
Consequently
, many students desire to attend university
oversea
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 because they meditate
what
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 they would receive in the future.
Moreover
, after graduated from
international
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 academy, they will not only obtain
the
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 superior diploma but
also
the
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 opportunity
in
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job
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the job
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. Hired by large cooperations, these
people
 will acquire high wages.
For instance
 in America,
the
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 country which consists of
variety
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a variety
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 of
ethnics
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, the income is quite high and adequate for expenses, so
that is
 why America has the highest demand
in
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for
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 immigration.
Subsequently
, they will have better quality of
life
,
huge
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 amount of
saving
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savings
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 and assets, and family. Interestingly, many families emigrating to civilize
city
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cities
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 due to the better
life
 and welfare. While the amount of brilliant new generations going aboard enlarge,
country
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the country
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 will face with
issue
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the issue
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 - underdevelopment - If the proportion between underdeveloped
people
 is larger than intelligent
people
,
people
's attitude will
hard
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 to develop.
Additionally
, the regulations will be worthless because
people
 do not realize the importance
how
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 to live in society.
Hence
, it leads
underdevelopment
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to underdevelopment
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. To summarize, jobs, education and quality of
life
 are the major factors why
people
 immigrate.
In contrast
, society
get
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 affection because it loose population with capability, so it faces
downturn
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a downturn
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.
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