Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that

libraries

are no longer efficient and economical compared to Ebooks while

the

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other

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others

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strongly oppose

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this

idea.

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essay is aimed at discussing

about

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both sides and

then

distributing my own perspective point. In the age of industrialization and modernization, technology is making dramatical

progess

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progress

process

and becoming an

indispenable

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indispensable

part of our daily lives. It is a revolution in the way our lives is operated, which includes how we read

books

. By technological breakthrough, Ebooks are now replacing traditional

books

with their outstanding functions.

First

, it is more convenient in comparison with paper

books

. You just need to take along with you a smartphone or

a portable reading devices

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, read whenever and wherever you want

instead

of a huge bookcase that can not be brought

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anywhere apart from your house.

Second

, it is uncheap to use online

books

. Reading on the Internet means no paper wasted, no printing costs, no shipping taxes, the only thing you have to pay is the copyright of the author.

A traditional

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reading material can be three to

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as expensive as an online one.

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that

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completely removing the appearance of

libraries

causes a huge loss to the human being. The development of machinery does not mean we have to abandon the existence of

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libraries

. The

first

reason to opt for reading directly from a book is that it is much more trustworthy for readers because networked information is not always legitimated.

In contrast

, a book does due to it was produced under an author's name so it is hard to find a false claim on a book. Another reason for those who are not fond of utilizing a computer, children are presumed to not concentrate on their learning's mood on the computers by the virtue of entertainment factors. To illustrate, they can catch attention from their favourite online games or movies

thus

the process of achieving knowledge can be influenced. To sum up,

although

computers have their method of progressing and efficiency.

Nonetheless

libraries

are

also

vital for the sake of educating children in a proper pattern.

Then

, I strongly disagree with the idea of the question.

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