Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate between those who state that watching movies on our portable devices serves the same purpose as watching at the cinema and those who argue that to get the most out of a movie, people should watch at a cinema. Undoubtedly there are notable points from both

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of the argument which will be elucidated

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along with my personal opinion.

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, commentators who believe that accessibility of movies on personal devices eliminates the necessity for a theatre visit points to the immense efficiency derived from it. To supplement,

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can save money, and

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due to the privilege of avoiding the queue for

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and transportation. A

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argument is that the same film can be enjoyed at the convenience of people’s homes or any place of their preference.

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, some like to watch

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on the commute to kill

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, supporters of viewing

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at the theatres state that the audience

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to experience the quality sound systems and the motions on a big screen which

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cannot obtain from watching at home.

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, individuals can enjoy the film with a company whether be friends or families as an activity for bonding.

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, those who watch the latest blockbusters at a cinema are

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few fractions of people to see it whereas online audiences are required to wait a certain period of

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. Especially Marvel and Disney movies,

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, are very hyped by fans which is why many opt to see

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at the theatres. To conclude, the privileges of the viewability of

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from our mobile devices are not to be ignored.

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, I presume that stronger arguments are in favour of those who support watching

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at the theatre as

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can benefit from the high-quality visual and sound, appreciate the valuable

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with loved ones and can be

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to view their favourite movie.