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Fresh water reserves are becoming less worldwide. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions that can be done by countries and individuals?

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Lack of drinking
water
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 resources has become a pressing issue concerning several nations. Drastic environmental changes are the major cause of
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 problem. Collecting rainwater could be one of the solutions that can be done by the Government as well as locals.
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 with, it is well known that
water
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 is essential for human survival. One of the reasons is climate change. To illustrate, In the
last
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 ,decade many rivers turned dry due to drought in the region. we have witnessed a dramatic weather change due to global warming.
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, Pollution is the
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 major cause. Many industries pollute the
water
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 surface by throwing chemicals in it which not only affects
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 to drink for humans but
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 affects marine life. The
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 but not the least reason is unawareness among people.
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, People waste plenty of
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 daily by turning on the taps during brushing their teeth,washing their hands and more. The solutions to surmount
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 issue needs to be taken by every person as well as the ministry. The state should impose a ban on high carbon-emitting vehicles which elevate global warming.Another solution would be regulating the industries waste material and giving a better dumping process by making law and order.
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, the authority should spread awareness about
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 scarcity among locals and teach them to use the
water
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 properly. As individuals, people should recycle the
water
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 to use for planting and flushing in toilets. In conclusion, after deliberating the causes of shortage of drinking
water
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such
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 as weather change, pollution it can be suggested that by taking some steps by country and their natives to resolve
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 taking stringent actions and self-awareness , we can mitigate the problem.
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