Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
It is considered that lot of
sugar
products
have impacted people
health. It is suggested that government should impose a higher tax on the products
and companies can be given more healthy foods for their employees. I totally agree with this
statement that high-level sugar
products
can be caused health problems.
Because of their busy lives, many people
consume fast food and drinks. Firstly
, today candy industry and fast-food industry have developed well compared to the last
ten years. For instance
, most of the kids start eating fast food from around 5-6 years old. And it will cause some diseases such
as blood pressure, obesity and heart attacks. Doctors reveal that these days diabetes and blood pressure have outspread rapidly due to the high level of sugar
products
and drinks. Even if doctors give some advice for people
try to avoid these products
and keep healthy diets. But people
do not follow these Correct your spelling
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On the other hand
, some people
say one suggestion for that government should impose high tax rate for these products
. Thereby people
could not tend to buy sugary products
. They may turn to buy healthier food and more affordable foods. For instance
, a banana-flavoured beverage cost 3 times the price of a box of fresh bananas. Due to the craving for sugar
people
tend to buy cheaper ones. Although
fresh fruits also
contain sugar
and natural sugar
much healthier than added ones. However
, companies can be given healthy foods instead
of high-level sugar
products
. For instance
, they can be reduced the sugar
level and make more natural products
. in this
case, their employees will have a healthy life.
In conclusion, everyone should be careful and reduced the high-level sugar
products
what
they eat. And Correct pronoun usage
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also
, the government can put some regulations. Thereby people
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