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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. Do you agree or disagree.

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Some
people
 love games that involve life-threatening risks and some enjoy games that are safe and fun.
Sports
 like sky diving and skiing are too risky and the cost of a mishap in
this
 event is a ruined career or death. Some
people
 argue that these
sports
activities
 should be restricted.
Although
, these events are risky, banning them entirely is not the way to go. For several
people
, these
activities
 are mere livelihood. I partially agreed that these
sports
 should be banned.
However
, there are some points that should be considered before making a final call.
To begin
, there are several professionals for whom these events are only a livelihood.
Activities
 like sky diving and skiing are not only performed for fun but
also
 for military exercises, conveyance, goods delivery and other needs. Owing to these needs, banning the sport could cause an adverse impact on a certain population and violate their traditional ways.
For instance
,
people
 in polar regions need to practice skiing in order to survive
such
 extreme conditions and perform their daily
activities
.
On the other hand
, these
sports
 can be banned for those that just play
it
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 for fun as it costs the life of a person or his career due to a small mishap. There are several ways for a person to entertain themselves and feel joy, specifically, those that don't involve risk. One clear example to support the argument is the recent study on accidents caused due to extreme
sports
 where it was noted that one in 300 visitors met with an accident and 95% of the accidents are met by unprofessional. To reiterate, Games like skiing and sky diving involves life-threatening risk and should be banned for visitors, particularly, for
people
 that have no valid experience.
Nevertheless
, there should be no restrictions to native
people
 for whom these events are mere livelihood.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adrenaline rush
  • risk threshold
  • thrill-seeking
  • safety protocols
  • hazard assessment
  • adventure tourism
  • regulatory framework
  • personal autonomy
  • informed consent
  • risk mitigation strategies
  • thrill-seeking behavior
  • protective gear
  • extreme athleticism
  • freedom of choice
  • accident prevalence
  • emergency response
  • courage and resilience
  • endorphin release
  • legal implications
  • peer pressure effects
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