In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Given reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

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in the future, newspapers and
paper
books
will be completely disappeared and E-
books
or online resources will
use
instead
of them. I strongly agree with
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books
,
magazines
and journals which are base on
paper
will deny and
population
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the population
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would prefer to
use
the
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. There are many reasons that people prefer to search on the
Internet
instead
of going to the bookshop or library.
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,the
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is the quickest
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our questions, importantly, we can
use
it 24 hours
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a day, so they haven't had any
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,
moreover
, its totally free, for sure
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some websites we have to pay little money for access to the information but it's really rare, once in a blue moon. I've always believed that, in
magazines
and
books
, writers have removed many real facts but many options given to us by the
Internet
.
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, online
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references
are more
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paper
resources.
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perspective, technology is highly beneficial for
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nature because
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trees
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cut
down for human's purposes. In the past,
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amount of greenery areas around the world were demolished and
transfered
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transferred
transformed
to
manufactores
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manufactures
for published
books
and
magazines
, thankfully, nowadays, people find it simple to search on the
Internet
, they know in
this
way, they conserve wildlife
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habitat
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more than four-fifth of society will
use
internet
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world,
paper
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magazines
aren't popular and people prefer using E-
books
instead
of them because it is free and the main point in it
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, it is
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way to find whatever
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they
want. I strongly
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which
this
statement that in the future , nobody will purchase printed
books
and
magazines
which will be highly beneficial for humans and
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nature.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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