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people are using a lot of online language translation apps.do the benefits of this outweigh the disadavantages

#people #language #translation #apps #outweigh #disadavantages
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Language
 expressive applications are currently being used by a large population.I will explore both the advantages and disadvantages in
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To begin
with
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 translation applications have come in handy in
this
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 times and seasons that
people
 are have become unsocial beings,back in the days it was easy and acceptable to learn a foreign
language
 the easy way
this
 applies to
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today's
todays
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 society but it is not rampant like the olden days,in the current world ,learning a foreign
language
 will most of the time include a class and a teacher
this
 was not the case in the ancient days,what has changed?technology has changed ways and protocols of being a
lingiustic
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linguistic
,introduction of
this apps
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 in our phones and computers has made learning easier and cheaper,
therefore
 despite being in a position that one has friends and colleagues who can easily do the translation, downloading of the same has become easier and faster.Not only are they for learning purposes but as a source of income,
for instance
,through the
applications
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people
 are earning good money by copy and pasting a different dialect that requires to be interpreted to either
english
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 or a local dialect.
On the other hand
,rarely will you find
people
 trying and with the interest of learning from their colleagues and friends because technology has turned us into unsocial beings our phones have become our closest friends ,
also
 they may not give the exact interpretation
thus
 misleading the user,they have as well been misused for individual gain rather than learning ,what do
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 mean by
this
 a number of
people
 will use them wrongly
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for example
 interpret a statement
that is
 vulgar to use it against some
people
. In
conclusion
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Language
 translating apps are easy to use and easily help especially when one is stuck and needs to express themselves in a
language
 they do not understand,
however
 regulation of vulgar interpretation should be limited and used for the intended purposes.
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