Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governemnts to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Recycling waste is one
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efficient methods in mitigating
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air
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and
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pollution. While most people voluntarily recycle their garbage, there are some people who believe that the government should make it mandatory for everyone to increase the
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of waste recycled. I completely agree that the
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government
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will automatically reduce
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air
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and
water
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pollution and
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provide jobs in
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industry. Recreating the products from junk improves the
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and
water
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quality significantly. It is evident that one of
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process
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that is
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employed by the municipal yards to get rid of scrap is to burn it and
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release it into the nearest
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resources
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as lakes, rivers etc. A recent study from
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Harvard University concluded that
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methodologies implemented to
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the filth diminished the
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quality by 15% and
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quality by 22%.
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determined that
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of people got sick by consuming the fish from the rivers and the seas where the garbage is released. So it is certain that reusing the scrap benefits the environment and humans in every possible way. By enforcing
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recycling as a duty that every citizen has to observe,
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the government
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open doors for
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an increase
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in job
oppurtinites
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opportunities
. Reusing the waste and creating the products from it requires
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amount
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of labour considering the
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that has been
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produced
over the
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decade. Companies
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PepsiCo
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established massive industrial plants to recycle
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junk. In conclusion, making
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recycling mandatory is the obvious step to be taken to reduce the garbage. Not only there are environmental benefits from it but there is
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a massive
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opportunity
for economic growth. I think the government should make recycling
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a mandatory duty for everyone and
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should take
responsiblity
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responsibility
to spread awareness around it.
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