In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many think that a plethora of

people

who have some diseases for having an unhealthy diet and eating more fast

foods

.

Therefore

it is believed that governments force

people

to pay more taxes for these products.

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nature of human

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,

people

can give up when they paying enormous

prices

for

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goods and it is

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thought to shape

people

’s behaviour. On the one hand,

although

people

in many countries suffering from eating fast

foods

, some

people

think that all

people

have

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to access

foods

at reasonable

prices

. Because forcing

people

to pay more

prices

is not fair when trying to solve

this

problem and governments bring restaurants to some limits.

For example

,

although

a friend of mine has reached 200 kg. , he continues to eat hamburgers every day from the same restaurant and does not mind the price. If our government were forced the restaurants to bring some sales limit, he would not

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to order on a regular basis.

On the other hand

, others think that governments should arrange the tax level of these products. Because

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there are many economic problems in many countries and everybody chooses their meals within their budget. Nobody wants to pay more when they can reach reasonable

prices

and these transactions can decrease the consumption of fast

foods

. The most important point to support my idea is, my mother always purchasing our meals considering the

prices

. If she see a different price of the product when comparing the past, she refused to buy.

However

, if someone buys

this

expensive product, the government will be gain more. Taking everything into consideration, the most common idea is forcing

people

to reject some unhealthy

foods

is arranging

prices

with tax levels. I am totally agreeing with

this

statement. Because the vital issue is economy nowadays and it can play a crucial role to

people

’s decisions.