Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
this
era, more information
is available everywhere; therefore
, it is widely believed that some essential information
such
scientific
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as scientific
research
should not freely
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be freely
published
due to funding. Meanwhile, the contrary view is that it will be better to access those without payment. I strongly believe those should be sold for investment Change the verb form
publish
further
research
.
As students are willing to gain more knowledge, they prefer to read more research
papers on the internet in the present. Generally, those
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that information
information
will provide fundemental
elements which are useful for some subjects in universities. Correct your spelling
fundamental
For instance
, most students must read the articles before doing the assignments, while some of them are required to pay before accessing the whole text. This
will be an obstacle for self-esteem
of university students because they can afford Add an article
the self-esteem
for
those journals and articles.
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apply
On the other hand
, scientists should be subsidised on their research
. According to the main requirement of conducting the research
is financial
investment, the published papers should be received the income. Add an article
a financial
For example
, to complete a
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apply
research
on a novel medicince
, researchers have been paying Correct your spelling
medicine
medicines
on
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for
the
raw materials, testing equipment and other involving items Correct article usage
apply
who
are extremely expensive. Correct pronoun usage
that
This
does not include the salary of the staff yet. Hence
, cost
of published articles should be considered Correct article usage
the cost
as
reasonable.
To conclude, I personally think the Change preposition
apply
information
in term
of science, business and the academic world should not be published freely due to the benefits on scientists and Fix the agreement mistake
terms
further
research
although
some student
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students
are
not able to access those.Change the verb form
is
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