Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

this

era, more

information

is available everywhere;

therefore

, it is widely believed that some essential

information

such

scientific

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as scientific

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research

should not

freely

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published

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due to funding. Meanwhile, the contrary view is that it will be better to access those without payment. I strongly believe those should be sold for investment

further

research

. As students are willing to gain more knowledge, they prefer to read more

research

papers on the internet in the present. Generally,

those

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that information

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information

will provide

fundemental

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fundamental

elements which are useful for some subjects in universities.

For instance

, most students must read the articles before doing the assignments, while some of them are required to pay before accessing the whole text.

This

will be an obstacle for

self-esteem

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of university students because they can afford

for

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those journals and articles.

On the other hand

, scientists should be subsidised on their

research

. According to the main requirement of conducting the

research

is

financial

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a financial

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investment, the published papers should be received the income.

For example

, to complete

a

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research

on a novel

medicince

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medicine

medicines

, researchers have been paying

on

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for

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the

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raw materials, testing equipment and other involving items

who

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are extremely expensive.

This

does not include the salary of the staff yet.

Hence

,

cost

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of published articles should be considered

as

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reasonable. To conclude, I personally think the

information

in

term

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of science, business and the academic world should not be published freely due to the benefits on scientists and

further

research

although

some

student

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students

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are

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not able to access those.