You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training courses that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter . give details of the courses . say how the courses would be useful . explain how the company could help you do this course.

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Dear David, I recently have seen one essential course from online, that course is called ADVANCED DIGITAL MARKETING course.

this

is a five-day plan conducted by Marketing association in our hometown,

this

is a full-time program, it will start on Monday 15 to Friday 20

this

month.

This

plan is most essential for our company because our companies sales ratio has declined in the recent months, You

also

think about how to increase the sales ratio. I ensure

this

plan will be helpful for our enterprise. After finish

this

internship program, we could be applied new marketing strategies for attracting the customer. I hope our enterprise might be gotten more profit from

this

. I want a five-day paid leave from you, I believe

this

time our management not being busy and no one applied in my team. That day no one will take leave I did conform from my fellow workers. I would be grateful if you could allow permission to participate in

this

. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you, Best wishes, Luna.

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