Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara or the Atlantic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places

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nowadays people use to

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which has extreme conditions

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dry and extreme cold.

However

, there are both pros and cons to

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situation. In

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In contrast

,discussing the topic of the advantages, the biggest is that,the tourists who

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destinations can get more experience than others. There are so many rere things that anyone does not even know the name of the place.

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learn how many difficulties face the people who are already live there.

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can be given in an example,which is totally related to

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situation. A tourist who came from London to visit the Sahara desert,he surly feels too hot and sweating all over the daytime except in midnights.

As a result

,that he will definitely understand how hard these climates are to living beings.

On the other hand

, there are some drawbacks too when considering

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. To initiate , it will be subjected to die the people who cannot tolerate

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conditions.

For example

, a man who travelled the Himalayas in 1998

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subjected to die because he was unable to tolerate extremely cold weather.

Besides

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, the other one is he or she can be isolated if there is no relevant map or guides for

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roots as well as if there are

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restrictions to human beings. Other than that visitors have to spend more money than others to go

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difficult destinations. By

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have to collect more things to eat,because there are no much more peoples like other places To conclude, there are few demerits like high cost and life risks ,but there are many merits

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as gain new experiences as well as identifies difficulties too