Some people think it is important for children to take lessons outside the classroom, for example by visiting places such as local companies or public buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that there are many significant increments in taking

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to learn outside the

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. In my view, I believe that ideas have both positive and negative effects.

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, taking lessons for

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outside the

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has more upside than downside. On the

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hand, tutoring

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inside the

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can be highly beneficial for some reasons.

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of the key advantages is that the

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is not affected by external factors

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vehicles moving, people walking around and so on.

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, the majority of

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are more easily attracted to environmental factors than learning in

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. For that reason, learning in

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helps young

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focus more on studying.

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, learning extra-curricular activities costs a lot of

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. To organize an outside lessons trip, schools must spend

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for visiting places, means of transportation and so forth. Compared to studying in the

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, schools do not need to channel

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into these activities.

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, they can invest

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in other events.

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, educating

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inside is monotonous and can not provide

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practical

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knowledge.

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, educational institutions should take

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to learn outside the

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. The

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idea could be that it provides

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practical experiences which enhance

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creativity and the ability to explore

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. To illustrate, visiting local companies or public enterprises can make

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watch the operation of conglomerates which could increase their enjoyment of research and exploration.

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, some theoretical subjects

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as history, visiting architecture and museums can provide

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practical and relevant knowledge regarding the subject

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difficult to grasp if studied in

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.

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,

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learn better in the light of real-life experiences that they have at the museum.

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, improving mental and physical

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’s health is

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of the advantages of taking lessons outside.

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, research points out that changing environmental studying can help

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become excited and learn better. Visiting places

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makes

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chill out and be more active

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of just studying in

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place. In conclusion,

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tutoring

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are economical and not distracted, I believe that educating outside have more beneficial reasons.