Some people prefer to directly help or support people in need in the local community. However, others choose to give money to the national or international organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays there are several ways to help
people
around the world, Use synonyms
donation
is one of them. There are some Add an article
the donation
a donation
people
who choose to help Use synonyms
people
personally or through local communities, while others like to assist the needy Use synonyms
people
to the national or international Use synonyms
organisations
. I Use synonyms
this
passage I will try to explain both notions and Linking Words
also
give my opinion.
Generally speaking, there are ample Linking Words
of
reasons why Change preposition
apply
people
chose to donate their valuable Use synonyms
money
to Use synonyms
the
non Correct article usage
apply
profitable
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profit
organisations
. Perhaps the main reason is that why Use synonyms
people
favour Use synonyms
this
is that, the NGOs charity-table trusts or other helping institutions because they are professional and have up to date information about helpless Linking Words
people
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, they can provide help effectively compare to local communities or individuals. For an instance, Linking Words
bidha
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bid
nondon
is a nonprofit organisation in Bangladesh, every year they received national and international aid from various countries the reason is that they work executively as well as they are very transparent. Correct your spelling
London
Furthermore
, donators donate Linking Words
money
to helping Use synonyms
people
’s Use synonyms
specially
in Replace the word
especially
Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
under developed
and developing countries to assist get out Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
from
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of
poverty
line for that reason they choose NGOs. Correct article usage
the poverty
Therefore
, those Linking Words
organisations
helped them to overcome their present condition. By giving free health care, medicine or small scale Use synonyms
no interest
loan.
On the other side, some Add a hyphen
no-interest
people
always love to help others personally because they have trust issues Use synonyms
on
charitable Change preposition
in
organisations
because they are using donated Use synonyms
money
for their personal entertainment. For an illustration, a report shows that in Vietnam, most of Use synonyms
non profits
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non-profits
organisations
are corrupted, they keep donated financial assistance in their pockets and spend so tiny amounts for Use synonyms
people
’s welfare. Use synonyms
Secondly
, individuals can help other Linking Words
people
so promptly rather Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
national Replace the word
than
organisations
because they acknowledge Use synonyms
about
Change preposition
apply
people
problems and Use synonyms
Linking Words
also
well informed about their needs. As well as he can personally know about his Add a missing verb
are also
money
can utilise his Use synonyms
money
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good
way or not.
To conclude with, in my point of view, both are playing Add an article
a good
significant
role to help needy Add an article
a significant
the significant
people
. It doesn’t matter what Use synonyms
from
of is that individuals or national, Correct your spelling
form
concern
should be donated Add an article
the concern
money
should Use synonyms
be reach
to the Change the verb form
be reached
be reaching
people
.Use synonyms
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