Many researchers believe that we can now study the behavior of children to see if they will grow up to be criminals. To what extend do you think crime is determined by genetics? Is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?

According to many scientists, it is now possible to predict if
children
will become
criminals
when they grow up. They believe
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genetics plays an important role in
children
turning to crimes. It is a big misconception and it is possible to stop them from becoming
criminals
. It is impossible to guess if anyone will become a criminal just by seeing the family roots.
Although
, genetics can be used to predict different features of a person like
appearance
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, diseases, talents, and sometimes even
behavior
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.
However
,
this
doesn't necessarily mean that we can determine the exact future of someone.
For example
, a person named "Chris Gardener" in New York who comes from a poor background and has criminal parents became one of the most successful
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. In fact, there is
also
a feature film "Pursuit of Happiness" which is based on his struggles in life.
Children
can be stopped from becoming
criminals
. The factors which
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a major role in
children
going down the wrong path are illiteracy, poverty, ignorance, and bad influence. Many of these factors could be eliminated by taking proper steps by
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to educate people about law and order. There should
also
be a guidance counsellor appointed in every school with whom
children
can share and discuss all kinds of problems.
For instance
, there were many cases discovered, where students were found selling illegal drugs in schools of Punjab, India. After that, it was made mandatory for all schools in Punjab to educate
children
about illegal drugs, their effects, and
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of selling them.
As a result
, drug trafficking was significantly reduced by 50% in schools of Punjab. In conclusion, genetics doesn't play any role in
children
becoming
criminals
and by taking appropriate steps it is possible to stop
children
from becoming
criminals
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • genetic predispositions
  • nature versus nurture
  • aggression
  • impulsivity
  • socio-economic status
  • coping mechanism
  • intervention programs
  • mental health support
  • community engagement
  • delinquency
  • early childhood education
  • emotional regulation
  • predictive policing
  • ethical concerns
  • discrimination
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