Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illness or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent years, whether mental illness and physical disabilities are equally treated in

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society is a disputed topic. Some

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believe that psychological issues are less likely to be accepted by the public, compared to physical disorders gaining

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excessive attention. I completely disagree with

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statement thanks to serval reasons which will be discussed in the following essay.

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the one hand, the

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primary factor to consider is that various communities have been overwhelmingly understanding the nature of mental disorders.

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significantly increasing owing to the chaotic environment, unfortunately, those sufferers inevitably become ourselves or intimate companions. Regarding Word Metal Health Day set by WHO,

for instance

, is to raise awareness of psychological issues and to mobilise efforts in support of

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illness.

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in

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society with

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facing

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depressive problem

such

as in the family, educational institutions, and workplaces.

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diseases, tending to recover eventually. The psychiatrist suggests that 80% of psychosis are likely to retrieve permanently by providing regular medicines,

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and therapies, giving an illustration.

On the other hand

, some opponents may argue that abundant nations always prioritise benefits to disable

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to understand

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are willing to offer privileges to

people

with physical disabilities.

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, in plentiful public transportations, they make access easy for wheelchair users and provide assistances who will be given to

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passengers.

Although

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viewpoint seems to have validity on the surface, what the opponents overlook is to contribute special facilities and equipment to cripples does not guarantee the quality of life. What

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means that handicapped communities have still struggled with pursuing limited careers.

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, in some developing countries, organizations offering job positions to

people

with physical disabilities are dramatically low. Even though these companies accept disable persons to be employees, they must experience

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minimum payments

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to the normal

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. In conclusion, I certainly disagree with the given scenario. If ministries and the public have still ignored

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inequality, incapacitated individuals can be hopeless.

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, governments need to create effective measures or feasible approaches in order to promote

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of

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communities.