Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people. Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even stopped. Discuss both views
We are living in a
celebrity obsessed
world where anything that they do or say become the headlines in the news. A segment of society is convinced that the Add a hyphen
celebrity-obsessed
media
intrusion into private lives
should be strictly controlled and prohibited. Others, however
, believe the opposite. I personally support the former view, because privacy is one of basic
human rights. The following paragraphs will discuss both opinions along with relevant examples.
To commence, pop and movie stars should be given a right to live their private Add an article
the basic
lives
on
their will without Change preposition
of
media
exposure. As human beings
they have Add a comma
,beings
flows
and can make mistakes. But if any kind of negative information is spread among the fans, it may have an adverse impact on their careers. Change the verb form
flowed
As a result
, celebrities may face mental issues and suffer from depression. Moreover
, they might want to be free, just like anyone else, to do anything they like. I believe that celebrities should not compromise their mental health for their jobs.
On the other hand
, publicity is a part of famous people
's lives
. Many stars actually like the media
to write about their private lives
in order to grab attention
of Add an article
the attention
people
and promote their work. They are desperate to stay in the news. They need it for their careers. Nonetheless
, this
desire to publish facts about a clebritiy's
private life should be initiated by Correct your spelling
celebrity's
themslves
. Laws should give privacy Correct your spelling
themselves
a
greater protection to deter Remove the article
apply
media
from making business on the lives
of famous people
.
To conclude, superstars need publicity in order to promote their careers. They need to appear in the news so that people
talk more about them. Nevertheless
, the media
intrusion should not be done against their will.Submitted by shoira.shakirovna on
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