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To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

#internet #life
Internet
 is an essential part of life in modern times. It has altered our lives socially, educationally, professionally and economically. In my opinion, the majority of these changes have led to a life
that is
 more practical and convenient.
Firstly
, shopping has become much easier with the aid of the
internet
, especially in the time of quarantine. Before we had to transfer to a supermarket or shopping centre to acquire our needs or desires, but now it is done by a click as well as reaching diverse brands, kinds and prices for a particular thing in seconds. The other benefit of the
internet
 is different platforms and courses for online studying which became an obligation in the time of the pandemic.
For instance
, in the recent two years, demand for online courses in universities increased significantly. Since the advantages of
this
 type of education has been felt truly.
Besides
, lots of books, articles and educational resources are available on the
internet
.
Thirdly
, employees have
also
 profited from the
internet
 by online working due to Covid-19. It is obvious that with the aid of the
internet
 and eliminating the need for transportation, more time and energy are saved as well as less polluted air as a consequence of fewer cars in the streets for moving to the workplace.
Finally
, communication has transformed totally by the means of the
internet
. It is now possible to socialize virtually with anyone in every part of the world. Conventional texting and calling have been almost deleted from our lives by the advent of thrilling apps
such
 as Whatsapp, telegram and skype. In conclusion, the
internet
 has become an inherent part of our lives and it seems that modern human beings can not survive without it. I strongly agree that it has made life more convenient in terms of shopping, education, career, and communication.
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