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Question: some movies are serious, designed to make the auidence think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movies do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples.

#movies #auidence #type
Movies
 have the power to make 
people
 laugh, cry, or think. A group of 
people
 like comedian 
movies
 because they can forget their problems, 
however
 other 
interest
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 in serious 
movies
. I prefer to watch both
kind
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kinds
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 of 
movies
 because there are some advantages and disadvantages of both 
type
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types
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 of 
movies
.
First
 of all, 
movies
 and serials are one the most accessible media and we can use in our bedroom, cell phone, or other places; because of 
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 it can reflect in our real lives, emotions, failures, or personality. Mainly, 
movies
 are designed to make you think and they are able to open your eyes 
about
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 some problems. For instance, if you watch 
a historical 
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historical movies
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movies
 about a country, you can learn about 
the
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 culture, dresses, or 
the
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 habits 
of
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them
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.   On the other hand, I believe that
,
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 serious 
movies
  can improve your communication. Usually, humans discuss more 
about
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 serious 
movies
 than comedic  because they have many questions to  answer. In the 
second
 place, after a long day outside of the home, a person 
need
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 a break. Amusing 
movies
 make 
people
 laugh. 
Besides
, watching 
movies
 or serials is one of the most popular 
entertain
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 in the world and 
people
 prefer to watch a comedic movie with their friends or family and 
enjoy
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. In addition 
to
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, laughing makes one feel better and it is important for their soul. In conclusion,  I think that every movie must teach us to be kind, strong and grateful and
also
 by watching 
movies
 
people
 can get different messages and which might be a quite a nature.
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