Some people say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work. Is hard work the key to success or is talent also important?

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When we talk about

success

, there are many opinions that have been expressed, some people claim that hard

work

is a key to

success

whereas others

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that

talent

is the most important thing to

success

. But my notion of

this

view

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is that both contribute to

success

. Here

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will shed light on my reasons for

this

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view point

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. One of the

manin

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main

key lead to

success

is hard

work

. Consistent give rise to

success

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A person

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Person

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who always

succeed

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are

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never give up. They don't mind how arduous the road to

success

is, how many times they fall or do not give up until they reach their goal like when we have a competition, we

alway

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always

practice until we win a medal.

On the other hand

, hard

work

is not enough to lead to

success

, it

also

takes

talent

to lead to

success

too like when we

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bad

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situation, we have to use our

talent

and wisdom to get out

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situation. Not only

talent

but

also

need others

such

as opportunity, experience, skills, perseverance and not giving up to lead to

success

. From the above ideas, combine to make a

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key to achieve the goal that we dream of. In my point of view,

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admit that

success

is 90

percent

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and 10

percent

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talented.

Although

success

could be due to hard

work

and

talent

but

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many other factors maybe will help you to

success

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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