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Some people think teaching children with different abilities benefits everyone while others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In recent years, there has been a growing trend that the usage of
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machine
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 may result in the loss of several jobs. I think
this
 is a positive trend because it can encourage business growth and productivity than humans. its drawbacks should not be overlooked because an
increase
 in the number of machines leads to unemployment and job security issues.
Initial
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 consequence is that the rate of homelessness
increase
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.
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,when they lose their job,they don’t have an opportunity to earn money so they can’t afford a house or pay rent.Another consequence is that they can’t pay for their children’s education,which could lead to the rate of crime may
increase
 because in the future they don’t have a degree to find a job.To
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,only jobs required creativity and a postgraduate degree can not be replaced by AI.
However
,
This
 phenomenon is greatly advantageous because it can develop the economy.The initial
adventage
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advantage
 is that
machine
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 isn’t bored and exhausted.An explanation for
this
 is that the lack of sleep is prone to cause lack of focus, decreased reaction times, irritability, and errors,
on the other hand
, the machine never needs to sleep. Another factor is that risky jobs can be undertaken by AI.
this
 can result in using AI in manufacturing not only to make processes more efficient but to
also
 keep human workers out of harm’s way. In conclusion,the merits would eclipse the downsides thanks to the fact that it increases the rate of production while it can lead to
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 in homelessness and crime.
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