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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Our life is filled with
advertisements
. You could see ads wherever you are,
such
 as posters in shopping malls, commercial buildings, led screens in
transportaion
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transportation
 stations and sticks in elevators or even when you are in bathrooms!
Advertisements
 are truly important for sales. But I totally disagree with the idea that it doesn't reflect the real needs of
the
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society. On one hand,
advertisements
 will make
people
 be
familar
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familiar
 with the products unconsciously. With the intense exposure of the
advertisments
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advertisements
, the desire to shop will be inspired.
People
 will be curious about what kind of product it is and why it becomes so popular. And the behaviour will spread widely so that
people
 around will do the same thing to follow the trend. But the
curiousity
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curiosity
 buying will help with the sales at the beginning period.
On the other hand
, only the high
quality
 and real need of a product will keep some earnest customers. Maybe
advertisements
 will bring some customers to buy the promoted item for the
first
 time because of
curiousity
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curiosity
, but
then
 they will share with friends about the
quality
 and
feelling
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feeling
 about whether or not it deserves the price. Only
a
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high
quality
 and useful functions will make
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positive
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spread
spreaded
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spread
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thus
 to attract more
people
 and remain old customers. In conclusion,
advertisements
is
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 a way to making products be well known and attract
people
 who want a try. It is high
quality
 and practical use combing to shape the real need of a product
thus
 to promote its sales for a long period.
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