Some people believe that it is better to accept bad situations, such as unsatisfactory Jobs and shortage of money . Others argue that it is better to try to improve the situations . Discuss both views and give your own opinion ?

Many individuals are of the opinion that negative circumstances

such

as skint finances and unpleasant occupation should be embraced whereas others

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stronger solutions to the situations.

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discusses both perspectives and why I believe

people

need to work towards improving their conditions. Some of the reasons why

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bear with unsatisfactory jobs and shortage of income

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due to the fact that in some countries, especially the

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countries example Nigeria , owing to the economic meltdown most industries that provides work for

people

are bankrupt and

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results

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lack or

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of Jones , thereby making

people

comfortable with

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situation they find themselves.

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is a cogent reason why they accept

such

circumstances so they are not under pressure and they can maintain a positive mindset regardless of the drawbacks and inconveniences they are faced with.

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, others argue it is noble to aim higher to improve poor predicament. Individuals with

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mentality tend to do more excellent, they are neither satisfied with

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of income

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of job.

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they always focus on finding new ways to improve their skills or find a more suitable paying job.

Such

attitude could bring about

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growth of a country

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leading to a boost in the workforce industries. In conclusion, I believe that both sides of the argument

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advantages,

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, am of the opinion it is important to aim at finding solutions to negative predicament because it brings about individuals accomplishments and a greater nation.