In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

It is true that in several countries, differences regarding parental roles can be obviously witnessed, which are possibly attributed to both internal and external factors.

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, I strongly believe that these distinctions

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be erased in

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future with the rise in

equality

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movement. The variation in

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and

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distributions within a family

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from differing innate traits and obsolete prejudices on genders. Given that

men

are born forceful and aggressive, they undoubtedly could provide physical protection for the family.

By contrast

, the gentle and sensitive manners of

women

help

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the emotional bonds among family members.

Moreover

, when it comes to a child’s upbringing, fathers tend to express their love via action as opposed to mothers, who might offer sentimental support.

Besides

, discriminating prejudices that advocate a masculine-driven society

also

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accountable for inequal household divisions. In many Asian countries,

women

’s role is taken for granted and they are discouraged

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a job like

men

. Rather they reluctantly sacrifice their career fulfilling domestic duty and fostering their offspring.

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,

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xenophobia in the form of

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wage gap is predominating

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workplace. Even worse, many companies only recruit

men

for managerial positions

while

refusing to employ

women

simply because they carry maternal leave. In recent years,

however

, the roles of mothers and fathers have become interchangeable owing to various changes in society. The ever-increasing awareness of gender equality has forced companies to strike a balance between male and

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employees. And

this

gives rise to working mothers, who share the financial burden with the father. Equally important, it is socially acceptable

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the father

leave

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jobs

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to spend more time looking after

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and doing in-house duty. In light of

this

, I advocate that

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household structure will inevitably replace the traditional one and become the norm in the long run. In conclusion,­ changes in parental roles are the result of

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movement and I believe

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development is, by all means, a positive trend, ushering in an egalitarian society.