Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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In recent years,there has been
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increase in
people
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travelling to
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inhabitable and hostile
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.A chunk of
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opines that
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people
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visit these
places
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in search of unique experience whilst others are sceptical about it.There are both advantages and disadvantages to
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will discuss both in
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with,
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reason for
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to visit
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a mobile
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places
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that helps them to boost their confidence. After the completion of
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journey, the exhilaration cannot describe in more words. It
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to test one’s limit.
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like Columbus, sale around the world to discover and connect Unkown lands.
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, tourism is growing leaps and bounds that
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to boost the economy of the particular country.
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the more tourist arriving in the country
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therefore
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more jobs opportunities created for
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as consequences the countries economy grow many folds.
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,
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to take unprecedented risks sometimes turn into
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dangerous situation. While completing
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the daring
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journey, many
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died and some of them got
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injury
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that made them immobile for their whole life.
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that cannot tolerate the severe conditions of
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Mount Everest while climbing and died.
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of essential resources
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remote areas.
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visiting turn
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worse. To conclude, in my opinion,
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the positive
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effect of visiting dangerous
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outweigh the negative
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as it will not only boost individual confidence but
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brings prosperity to
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country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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